Hide and Seek. Movie clip. (Screen shots)

Evaluation:
This is my Hide and Seek video. The positive point of this video all together is that the non-diegetic sound which is the mood music, went well with the action that was being shown. This is a positive factor because it can really keep the audience on the edge of their seats while the action draws them in. I believe that my video clip has a few negative points which can be revealed. These are:

1. The title - I forgot to edit my name onto the title which is played at the beginning, so instead it comes up with 'Hide and Seek Goes Here'. 
2. The lighting of my work varies - This means that the lighting of the movie itself can be make it look average and can put the audience off of watching the clip. 
3. The clips do not flow properly into each other throughout - This means that each clip can be revealed to the audience as the clips were filmed separately. 

The improvements I would personally make to this video clip would be to black out certain parts of the video so the mistakes of filming obvious separate clips can be covered up. I would also try and edit the lighting on each clip, so the different variety of lighting in each room is covered up. If I could film this video all over again, I would choose to complete it outside so the lighting stays the same but the movements of the camera and different camera shots can not be noticed from the different angles in a big space.